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My Old Friend
Today, I met my old friend.
He came to my home.
I was really suprised by his coming.
Nothing change from him, but as far as I see he becomes more fat than before we met.
We talk about everything.
Especially, we talk about married.
He decided to marry a beautiful virtouos girl.
He wanted to be a good husband after he married.
He told me he want to have many children then his life will be happy.
I said to him if that could make you happy, do it friend.
It was so beautiful meeting.

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- My Old Friend
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문장 1
- Today, I met my old friend.
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문장 2
- He came to my home.
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문장 3
- I was really suprised by his coming.
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문장 4
- Nothing change from him, but as far as I see he becomes more fat than before we met.
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문장 5
- We talk about everything.
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문장 6
- Especially, we talk about married.
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문장 7
- He decided to marry a beautiful virtouos girl.
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문장 8
- He wanted to be a good husband after he married.
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문장 9
- He told me he want to have many children then his life will be happy.
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문장 10
- I said to him if that could make you happy, do it friend.
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문장 11
- It was so beautiful meeting.
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