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  • From Country to City

  • I lived in a small country side before I was 13, I finished my elementary school there.
  • Usually I walked to school, it takes about 10 minutes.
  • We have to take 1 hour country bus to the junior high school in town，than we start the school dormitory life.
  • We went back home once a week, we went to school on Sunday afternoon, and back on Friday evening after the last class, ended at 4:50pm.
  • Then my parents moved to the town when I was in grade eight.
  • But I still back to hometown twice a month, because my grandparents stayed in the country house.
  • We moved to the small city, after I was in senior high school.
  • My parents stayed in the small city to take care of my sister, who was in high school, and I went to a far away city to go to college.
  • When I was in the small country, I wanted to go out see the big world.
  • Only after experiencing, I realized that it is a very happy thing to live in the country.

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