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Hello!
Hi everyone!!
My name is Raquel and it's my frst text for be corrected =) I'm here to learn English and I would like to talk with people from all world.
I'm interested in culture and experience from all kind of people!
I love to learn about people and to exchange opinions!
If you want to meet me, just write me! =) Kisses! =)

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- Hi everyone!!
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- My name is Raquel and it's my frst text for be corrected =) I'm here to learn English and I would like to talk with people from all world.
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- I'm interested in culture and experience from all kind of people!
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- I love to learn about people and to exchange opinions!
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- If you want to meet me, just write me! =) Kisses! =)
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