Korreksies

Text from Darina1997 - English

  • I'm writing a story in English. Please help me to correct it

  • However, it wasn't this way.
  • In a minute Ariman raised himself flew up to the elephant's back and sank his teeth deeply into its throat.
  • Beside itself with pain, elephant tried to get rid of its enemy but in vain.
  • Its strength was decreasing, it began sinking to the floor.
  • And bow gunners were running away.
  • After Aramin took a short rest, a great lion named after the prince of light Ormuzd was led out to the arena.
  • People wanted to throw a live lamb to the beasts but it was not for princess Lindagul's eye (it was sight not for princess Lindagul) who had already got a pretty good look at those bloody sights.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English