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Chevy Impala
Hi, I'm İlayda.
I'm 16 years old.
I'm Turkish and I'm from Ankara.
I want develop my English language.
First, I like cars.
But, I love 1967 models Impala.
I'll get Impala.
For now, it Make friends with me. PLEASE ! :)

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- Hi, I'm İlayda.
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- I'm 16 years old.
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- First, I like cars.
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- But, I love 1967 models Impala.
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- I'll get Impala.
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- For now, it Make friends with me. PLEASE ! :)
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