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If Only
Yesterday I watched a movie called " If only " , it's about a couple : Ian and Samantha , they lived together in London .
Ian is British and her fiancée was American .
One day , Ian had a terrible dream in it his relationship with Samantha was over , because he gives his job the time and the priority .
The most terrible is when Samantha died .
When he woke up , he was surprised by seeing Samantha alive , but that wasn't enough for him to be reassuring by reason of the dream's events that they become real .

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- Yesterday I watched a movie called " If only " , it's about a couple : Ian and Samantha , they lived together in London .
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- Ian is British and her fiancée was American .
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- One day , Ian had a terrible dream in it his relationship with Samantha was over , because he gives his job the time and the priority .
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- The most terrible is when Samantha died .
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- When he woke up , he was surprised by seeing Samantha alive , but that wasn't enough for him to be reassuring by reason of the dream's events that they become real .
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