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WALL-E
Hello!
I want to tell you about "Wall-e" animation.
I saw this animation in 2008.
I was surprised because I saw very interesting history.
Wall-e is a robot, He is very old clean-robot.
His aim is remove trash.
Once, in usually day he saw big space ship, The ship landed near his house and he landed robot with name "EVA".
This robots was made for research works.
She did search plants on the Earth.

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- WALL-E
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문장 1
- Hello!
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문장 2
- I want to tell you about "Wall-e" animation.
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문장 3
- I saw this animation in 2008.
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문장 4
- I was surprised because I saw very interesting history.
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문장 5
- Wall-e is a robot, He is very old clean-robot.
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문장 6
- His aim is remove trash.
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문장 7
- Once, in usually day he saw big space ship, The ship landed near his house and he landed robot with name "EVA".
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문장 8
- This robots was made for research works.
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문장 9
- She did search plants on the Earth.
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