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my life
Everyday I want change my selif .
Sometimes I want to be a good person that what make my parent proud of me.
I will what I want someday.

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- Everyday I want change my selif .
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- Sometimes I want to be a good person that what make my parent proud of me.
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- I will what I want someday.
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