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Text from David-from-Paris - English

  • Query

  • Hi everybody Let me start by a query.
  • I don't know how it works in USA but I'm wondering when summer holidays are supposed to finish and when school programs restart?
  • Since in France we are always less or more on vacations, this questions doesn't make sense.
  • I'm asking about that in order to know when hotel would be less crowded to visit NYC.
  • Of course, I am not waiting for a response, just help to enhance my english regarding a topic of daily life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English