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I want to speak and write English
Hi ! I'm Léna.
I'm French and i'm 21 years old.
I live next to Paris.
I am graduate of a higher technician certificate in Web Design, and this year, I prepare a diploma in Graphic designer.
Later (maybe in 10-15 years), I want to live in New Zealand with my boyfriend.
That's our dream.
So, I must learn English.
But more than anything, I want to have friends with whom I can talk and maybe we will meet.

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- Hi ! I'm Léna.
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- I'm French and i'm 21 years old.
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- I live next to Paris.
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- I am graduate of a higher technician certificate in Web Design, and this year, I prepare a diploma in Graphic designer.
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- Later (maybe in 10-15 years), I want to live in New Zealand with my boyfriend.
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- That's our dream.
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- So, I must learn English.
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- But more than anything, I want to have friends with whom I can talk and maybe we will meet.
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