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Hello
I'm studying English but to write in English is rare opportunity for me.
So I'm just finding friends who talk with me.
I don't know how wrong my sentences are.
But from now, I'm no longer ashamed.
With practice, I'll improve my English level.
Please help me. Thank you

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- Hello
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句子 1
- I'm studying English but to write in English is rare opportunity for me.
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句子 2
- So I'm just finding friends who talk with me.
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句子 3
- I don't know how wrong my sentences are.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- But from now, I'm no longer ashamed.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- With practice, I'll improve my English level.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Please help me. Thank you
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6