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shopping
I don't like to go shopping.
There are almost always lot of people and very noisy, especially in supermarkets.
First I'd prefer search something in internet and after that to order this thing with delivery home.
But, for example, the fresh vegetables I buy at market and bread at a kiosk in the street nearby my home.

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- I don't like to go shopping.
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- There are almost always lot of people and very noisy, especially in supermarkets.
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- First I'd prefer search something in internet and after that to order this thing with delivery home.
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- But, for example, the fresh vegetables I buy at market and bread at a kiosk in the street nearby my home.
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