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The time - watching TV with my Grandma and Grandad
I enjoy this time when I watching TV with my Grandparents.
I think it's so funny and happy.
They always talk about the story of play--characters, playing is not important. it's important that I stay with them.

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- I enjoy this time when I watching TV with my Grandparents.
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- I think it's so funny and happy.
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- They always talk about the story of play--characters, playing is not important. it's important that I stay with them.
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