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  • My Chinese Spring Festival Holiday

  • Chinese festival is around the begining of February and which is from 10th to 24th in February this year.
  • I have a week holiday and i visited my best friend on the first day,who has been married and got a baby girl in the same year ,the dragon year,which Chinese all believe the most lucky year.
  • Her baby girl is cute,however, she has been in the period that she doesn't nursing even she is hurgry.My friend are worried about her baby's health.We have no time to talk freely like our childhood as she always attend her baby.But it doesn't matter,we have been friends when we were 5 year and firmly believe our friendship will last for our life.
  • It will be a nice year,send my best wish to you,my friends.

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    • I have a week holiday and i visited my best friend on the first day,who has been married and got a baby girl in the same year ,the dragon year,which Chinese all believe the most lucky year.
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    • Her baby girl is cute,however, she has been in the period that she doesn't nursing even she is hurgry.My friend are worried about her baby's health.We have no time to talk freely like our childhood as she always attend her baby.But it doesn't matter,we have been friends when we were 5 year and firmly believe our friendship will last for our life.
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