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  • The Deserts

  • The graph shows the diverse sizes, average annual rainfalls, average temperatures and temperature extremes in three different deserts in three different continents.
  • According to the graph, the highest level of rainfall can be seen in the south of the Sahara Desert in Africa with 12.7 cm annually, while the least one happens in the east of the Taklimakan Desert in Asia with only 1.0 cm.
  • The Great Basin Desert in North America gets as hot as the Sahara Desert in Africa with 30c in summer, however, the Sahara Desert has an almost mild temperature during winter, while the temperature in the Great Basin Desert goes under 8c.
  • The interesting point is, The Talkiman Desert, with -26.1c, has the lowest recorded temperature among these deserts.
  • On the other hand, the Sahara Desert, with 58c, has the highest recorded temperature.
  • The graph also shows, that the Great Basin Desert is the smallest and the Sahara Desert is the biggest desert among these three deserts.

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    • The graph shows the diverse sizes, average annual rainfalls, average temperatures and temperature extremes in three different deserts in three different continents.
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    • According to the graph, the highest level of rainfall can be seen in the south of the Sahara Desert in Africa with 12.7 cm annually, while the least one happens in the east of the Taklimakan Desert in Asia with only 1.0 cm.
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    • The Great Basin Desert in North America gets as hot as the Sahara Desert in Africa with 30c in summer, however, the Sahara Desert has an almost mild temperature during winter, while the temperature in the Great Basin Desert goes under 8c.
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    • The graph also shows, that the Great Basin Desert is the smallest and the Sahara Desert is the biggest desert among these three deserts.
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