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My holidays in Barbados
Hi, i went to Barbados island, 2 weeks ago.
It was fabulous.
I participed to the jouvert morning, it's a carnival with paint.
People threw painting on others and we're dance on soca music. It was funny.
I didn't see but i heard that Will Smith was there at the same time.
Ooooh i would like to see him.
The 4th on monday, we're going to jump (people say jump to the carnival in the caribbean island), oh yes i was there with my friends.
We had costums with feather, and danced all the day.
My feet hurted me, but i won't stop to dance 'cause i loved it.
I hope, i can return next year and if you search a good destination in caribbean, go to Guadeloupe my island or Barbados .... have a good day people !!!

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- Hi, i went to Barbados island, 2 weeks ago.
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- It was fabulous.
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- I participed to the jouvert morning, it's a carnival with paint.
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- People threw painting on others and we're dance on soca music. It was funny.
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- I didn't see but i heard that Will Smith was there at the same time.
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- Ooooh i would like to see him.
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- The 4th on monday, we're going to jump (people say jump to the carnival in the caribbean island), oh yes i was there with my friends.
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- We had costums with feather, and danced all the day.
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- My feet hurted me, but i won't stop to dance 'cause i loved it.
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- I hope, i can return next year and if you search a good destination in caribbean, go to Guadeloupe my island or Barbados .... have a good day people !!!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10