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The role of celebrities is to keep the American Dream alive.
Discuss
-For the great majority of people, they hope always the American Dream.
This is the social success in America even if there is an important rate of poverty.
How and why could celebrity keep the American Dream alive ?
Firstly, we must point out that in America there is a gap between rich and poor.
A lot of immigrant come to America in order to improve their living conditions.
They believe at the America Dream.
Why many people believe always at the America Dream ?
This is thanks to famous people.
Indeed, there are celebtity who have succeeded.
These are showing their social success via the media like Internet (Facebook, etc...) , or TV show.
They tell their way before their success.
Thus, many people in America or immigrant think that a similar story could them happened.
It should be remembered that this is a Dream.
And it's scarce like situation.
There is also a seamy side.
In addition, many people, who really want this, can lose happiness because this American Dream is just an illusion.
And they have to do facing many life problems.
To conclude, the America Dream for many people is just a dream and not a reality.
But the success of some people can give a few of hope, and this may people help in order to live.
In my opinion, the America Dream is difficult to reach it.
Time will tell whether there will be other people who suceed with nothing. 239 words
August 2014
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