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My day of yesterday. Very short article
Yesterday, this time we was eating the pie in the cafe, after i went to the cinema with my friends on the movie with the name of "The Expendables" it was a nice film, one of my friend had seen this film, but watched it again with us.
I finish the words of Ice Cube:"It was a good day".
Have a nice day!

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- My day of yesterday. Very short article
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- Yesterday, this time we was eating the pie in the cafe, after i went to the cinema with my friends on the movie with the name of "The Expendables" it was a nice film, one of my friend had seen this film, but watched it again with us.
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- I finish the words of Ice Cube:"It was a good day".
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- Have a nice day!
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