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從Blueciel來的文本 - English

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My holidays are finish
My holidays are finish, now, i come back in high school.
I'm exited to discover a new things in subjects.

BluecielAugust 2014赶紧投票吧！
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标题
- My holidays are finish
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- My holidays are finish, now, i come back in high school.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm exited to discover a new things in subjects.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2