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  • Parents always consider that children should be well educated.
  • But sometimes they choose different ways to teach their children.
  • The part of the parents think the children should be received the various and abundant the knowledge as much as possible when they get a little older.
  • However the rest of them totally disagree with it.
  • They think the children just need to learn some limited subjects.
  • Let us think about the first situation which children should learn a wide range of subject and develop knowledge.
  • People who has this opinion think building a foundation of knowledge is the most important to children.
  • If the children have a huge base of the knowledge, they will have more possibilities to achieve the success in the future.
  • They don’t need to be affected by leaning the basic information.
  • Because they already fulfill it.
  • For instance, in China, a lot of the parents like sending their children to all kinds of the courses including math, literature, music etc. On the other hand, some people consider that the children just should learn a small number of subject in detail.
  • Because it will give children more the time to play.
  • They don’t want their children waste time on some stupid “knowledge” early.
  • Furthermore, they think the children can not absorb all of them at same time.
  • So they must carefully choose courses which are suitable for their kids instead of the amount of the subjects.
  • In my opinion, I really think we need balance these two suggestions.
  • Because both of them are all good for growth of children.
  • What we need to do is adjust details when we teaching them.
  • That we should develop the knowledge diversity meanwhile we also need find out what is best subject to our children.

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