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  • Yesterday I had lunch at my brother in law house, my parents also went to have lunch all together, it was an important day because it was the first time that all my family visited his house, he lives about 30 minutes from our house, what I liked most of his house was the patio, is quite big and the best is that he has 2 dogs, the dogs are very nice and I enjoyed playing with them.

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    • Yesterday I had lunch at my brother in law house, my parents also went to have lunch all together, it was an important day because it was the first time that all my family visited his house, he lives about 30 minutes from our house, what I liked most of his house was the patio, is quite big and the best is that he has 2 dogs, the dogs are very nice and I enjoyed playing with them.
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