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after I had seen a poignant movie, I decided to walk through the beach.
I craved something to eat; thereby, I went to a restaurant to have dinner. during the walk to the restaurant, I accidentally had my leg broken, because I was walking to fast.
I trudged through the beach and I was feeling a lot of pain in aftermath of the accident.
I arrived in the restaurant in fits and starts, but, unfortunately, I realised that I forgot my wallet at home, and I couldn't pay the bill.
The manager of the restaurant was patronizing me, and I felt bad for it.
After a convoluted tussle he allows me go home and take my wallet.
So, I took my wallet, payed the bill, and promised myself never go back in this sleazy restaurant.

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- after I had seen a poignant movie, I decided to walk through the beach.
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- I craved something to eat; thereby, I went to a restaurant to have dinner. during the walk to the restaurant, I accidentally had my leg broken, because I was walking to fast.
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- I trudged through the beach and I was feeling a lot of pain in aftermath of the accident.
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Sentence 4
- I arrived in the restaurant in fits and starts, but, unfortunately, I realised that I forgot my wallet at home, and I couldn't pay the bill.
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- The manager of the restaurant was patronizing me, and I felt bad for it.
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Sentence 6
- After a convoluted tussle he allows me go home and take my wallet.
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Sentence 7
- So, I took my wallet, payed the bill, and promised myself never go back in this sleazy restaurant.
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