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When I was walking to my car after my class was finished, a police officer made a admonition to me, because I parked in the wrong place.
I felt bad, because I didn't realised that I had done that, I heeded the officer, and therefore went home.
I vowed never do that again.
If I had to pay a fine, I would officially declare bankruptcy.
I drove home in a painstaking way.

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- When I was walking to my car after my class was finished, a police officer made a admonition to me, because I parked in the wrong place.
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- I felt bad, because I didn't realised that I had done that, I heeded the officer, and therefore went home.
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- I vowed never do that again.
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- If I had to pay a fine, I would officially declare bankruptcy.
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- I drove home in a painstaking way.
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