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從AlandeOz來的文本 - English

  • Greeting

  • Hello everyone !...
  • I'm Alan, I'm an International Business student and I would like meet people to speak and improve my english.
  • My English isn't good enough but I want to learn it.
  • If someone needs help with the Spanish Language please tell me. :)

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