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Text from aabdan - English

Formal Letter
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing in connection with your request for increasing car insurance payment from 500$ to 750$ starting from next year.
As I have a light vehicle not sports one and as I have insurance with you for couple of years with free accident so, I did not get any benefits from insurance.
In addition, and as you know the other car insurance companies are keeping their rates without increment.
Therefore, I did not see any reason to increase the insurance amount.
In light of this, I would like to request that to keep insurance amount at the same rate or I am sorry to tell that I will start looking to another car insurance company.
I look forward to hearing from you about actions you would like to take.
Yours faithfully, Ahmad.

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- Formal Letter
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Sentence 1
- Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing in connection with your request for increasing car insurance payment from 500$ to 750$ starting from next year.
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Sentence 2
- As I have a light vehicle not sports one and as I have insurance with you for couple of years with free accident so, I did not get any benefits from insurance.
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- In addition, and as you know the other car insurance companies are keeping their rates without increment.
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- Therefore, I did not see any reason to increase the insurance amount.
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Sentence 5
- In light of this, I would like to request that to keep insurance amount at the same rate or I am sorry to tell that I will start looking to another car insurance company.
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- I look forward to hearing from you about actions you would like to take.
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Sentence 7
- Yours faithfully, Ahmad.
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