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My day
Today, I have work at 8:45 AM.
I have finish at 12:15 PM.
So, it's the holidays in France ! Fifteen days.
My friends are party to the snow in Grenoble.

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- My day
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句子 1
- Today, I have work at 8:45 AM.
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句子 2
- I have finish at 12:15 PM.
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句子 3
- So, it's the holidays in France ! Fifteen days.
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句子 4
- My friends are party to the snow in Grenoble.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4