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從Krakers來的文本 - English

  • Description of painting called "play station"

  • That's how the "ladder" of influence goes, game creator steers boy by play and afterwards his mother seems to be neglected with lack of attention.
  • What also goes into my mind , are the white sheets, perhaps they are symbolizing vulnerability of the nowadays population, grown up on clear and physical effortless environment.

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    • That's how the "ladder" of influence goes, game creator steers boy by play and afterwards his mother seems to be neglected with lack of attention.
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    • What also goes into my mind , are the white sheets, perhaps they are symbolizing vulnerability of the nowadays population, grown up on clear and physical effortless environment.
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