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my friendship
Today I met with a Chinese girl.
She is so lovely and cute.
She asked me a address and I took her to where she went.
We spoke English and I notice this: my English is terrible.
I wanna learn English and I wanna friends from everywhere.
I hope Wè can realize this.
.. have a good day..

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- Today I met with a Chinese girl.
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- She is so lovely and cute.
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- She asked me a address and I took her to where she went.
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- We spoke English and I notice this: my English is terrible.
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- I wanna learn English and I wanna friends from everywhere.
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- I hope Wè can realize this.
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- .. have a good day..
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