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Trip to Manhattan
I'm going to New York city and I want stay New Jersey.
Do you know name of hotel with service (bus) go and back to Manhattan?

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标题
- Trip to Manhattan
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句子 1
- I'm going to New York city and I want stay New Jersey.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Do you know name of hotel with service (bus) go and back to Manhattan?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2