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  • Mini Essay: The Pros and Cons of the Newest Devices

  • In the modern world the newest high-tech items are creating difficulties in daily life.
  • Hence, it is thought that getting rid of them will make our lives simpler.
  • In this essay I am going to discuss the positive and negative sides of technological things and state my opinion about them.
  • On the one hand, there are things which make people nervous while they are using them.
  • For instance, elderly people sometimes have a problem with understanding how to use the Internet, smart phones, tablets, computers, etc. When some of them try to use those things, they could not understand how these kinds of high-tech things are working.
  • As a result, they start to feel miserable when something does not work as they expected.
  • On the other hand, the newest devices make other people's lives easier in the case when they know how those things work.
  • For example, the Internet helps some people to work at home, and mobile phones have provided the ability to call your friends and relatives from almost any place in the world.
  • Of course those people, that get used to using them, had some problems when they had started using those types of technological devices, but after a couple of attempts they understood how to use them. and, most importantly, now they cannot live without things such as computers, the Internet, etc. To conclude, there is no doubt that technologies make some people's lives too complicated.
  • As a result some of them become miserable.
  • I think that for some people such as the elderly, it is better to live without those things.
  • However, the majority of people should use the newest technological items when they make their lives better.

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    • For instance, elderly people sometimes have a problem with understanding how to use the Internet, smart phones, tablets, computers, etc. When some of them try to use those things, they could not understand how these kinds of high-tech things are working.
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    • Of course those people, that get used to using them, had some problems when they had started using those types of technological devices, but after a couple of attempts they understood how to use them. and, most importantly, now they cannot live without things such as computers, the Internet, etc. To conclude, there is no doubt that technologies make some people's lives too complicated.
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