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That night, i dreamed about a girl, a sweet girl.

She was beautiful with sweet skin, sweet face and she was wearing a pink dress.

When i saw her, i took his hand and told her that my hearth was beating too fast when i saw her and that i can't stop looking at her because i'm fascinated by her beauty, the smoothly of her skin.

And after, i told her that i would be very happy if she accept to be my girlfriend.

She was looking at me without saying a word.

She was smiling and after few seconds, she told me that she is ok.

My joy was inimaginable.

I was so happy to have find someone who loves me like i'm.

I was approacching my mouth to her lips to kiss her when my Brother woke me up...

I was so angry with him but it was nothing else, just a dream, a sweet dream i had.

My wish is that i will find someone like that sweet sugar girl.

Thank you for corrections... and wish you a good day.