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Trip to London
I´m planning to travel to London.
I´ve family there.
Will be my first trip to Europe.
Maybe I go to France too.
I need to improve my english.
If you can help me contact me. Thank you

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- Trip to London
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- I´m planning to travel to London.
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- I´ve family there.
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- Will be my first trip to Europe.
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- Maybe I go to France too.
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- I need to improve my english.
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- If you can help me contact me. Thank you
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