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about learning language
Hi all, Im writing this for i would like to learn how to write English properly.
I would make some mistake with preposition and grammar .
That's why I need to know how I make a mistake and correct it for improving my ability at this stage.
It will be great if someone could help me for that. Thanx.

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- about learning language
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句子 1
- Hi all, Im writing this for i would like to learn how to write English properly.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would make some mistake with preposition and grammar .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- That's why I need to know how I make a mistake and correct it for improving my ability at this stage.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- It will be great if someone could help me for that. Thanx.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4