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Ciao
Hi guys.
I'm Paolo from Cilento, a gorgeous place in the Salerno province.
I'm here to improve my English and German.
Of course I would be glad to help you in learning Italian.
Everybody who is interested in learning Italian and comes form Germany or England can contact me with no problems.

PaoloD90September 20140% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Ciao
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi guys.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm Paolo from Cilento, a gorgeous place in the Salerno province.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I'm here to improve my English and German.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Of course I would be glad to help you in learning Italian.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Everybody who is interested in learning Italian and comes form Germany or England can contact me with no problems.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5