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Fairy Tail
Fairy Tail is the name that I appreciate.
The story deals with wizards.
They belong to a prestigious guilde, called Fairy Tail.
These younger wizards have to choice a mission, after they will accomplish it they receive a reward like jewels.
They do this job for living.

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- Fairy Tail
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Fairy Tail is the name that I appreciate.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- The story deals with wizards.
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句子 3
- They belong to a prestigious guilde, called Fairy Tail.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- These younger wizards have to choice a mission, after they will accomplish it they receive a reward like jewels.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- They do this job for living.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5