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  • the last saturday

  • The last saturday i went to my friend's party, all start good but in the bar i drank a lot so i started to cry and then all it's blur, i don't remember nothing i only know that i arrived to my home and i was so drunk, the next morning i wake up in my bedroom.
  • It was a wildride jajaja but my frind said to my that all people was drunk and the party was very cool!

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    • The last saturday i went to my friend's party, all start good but in the bar i drank a lot so i started to cry and then all it's blur, i don't remember nothing i only know that i arrived to my home and i was so drunk, the next morning i wake up in my bedroom.
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