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The Consumer Society
In the period before the industrial revolution the consumer appreciate long live products witch also can use from the following generation.
As the industrial revolution starts this point of view changed to a consumption patters witch is living from a buy and waste consumer.
It isn't necessary any more that produces live a lifetime and it is also not necessary that products live only on generation.
This development is grown up by the rinsing incomes and mind changing of the society.

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- In the period before the industrial revolution the consumer appreciate long live products witch also can use from the following generation.
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문장 2
- As the industrial revolution starts this point of view changed to a consumption patters witch is living from a buy and waste consumer.
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- It isn't necessary any more that produces live a lifetime and it is also not necessary that products live only on generation.
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- This development is grown up by the rinsing incomes and mind changing of the society.
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