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What I am going to do.
Today I telephoned to one international company if they are still taking graduates.
But hiring manager responded to me that now it is not actual.
But I would try next year.
So this year I will be working in my present job and preparing for this next job by learning English much more than I have been learning until now.
I also want to extend my knowledge in accounting and financial management.
I think that applying for some free internet course provided by some business university would be really beneficial.

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- What I am going to do.
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- Today I telephoned to one international company if they are still taking graduates.
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- But hiring manager responded to me that now it is not actual.
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- But I would try next year.
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- So this year I will be working in my present job and preparing for this next job by learning English much more than I have been learning until now.
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- I also want to extend my knowledge in accounting and financial management.
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- I think that applying for some free internet course provided by some business university would be really beneficial.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6