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It is my dream.
What i want?
Maybe i want to be a rich and successful?
Yes, but the more important for me in my life is to have a family, childs.
I want to live in the foreign country with my famile, will organized family business.
I will be giving a goodness others people.

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- What i want?
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- Maybe i want to be a rich and successful?
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- Yes, but the more important for me in my life is to have a family, childs.
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