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Hi guys, i'm MIchele, i'm from Rome.
I have a goal and ask for you help to accomplish it, i want to manage a business conversation in a excellent English.
In a couple of months.
Thank you so much for all your support!

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- Hi guys, i'm MIchele, i'm from Rome.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I have a goal and ask for you help to accomplish it, i want to manage a business conversation in a excellent English.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- In a couple of months.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Thank you so much for all your support!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3