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CALILA AND DEMENE
CALILA AND DEMNE is the oldest book in the world that write about human,s life .
But players are animals.
The writers are INDIAN .
We don't know who are them .
But this book is magical book .I love it .

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- CALILA AND DEMNE is the oldest book in the world that write about human,s life .
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- But players are animals.
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- The writers are INDIAN .
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- We don't know who are them .
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- But this book is magical book .I love it .
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