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I'm so happy
i have written a text about learning a language 15 minutes ago.
Immidiately, a new friend here, his name is JARMIL who is willing to spend his time to correct my text with so many mistakes. i'm so happy.
Thank you so much, JARMIL.
I hope we could be friends and you can correct my text frequently.(Smile)

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- I'm so happy
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- i have written a text about learning a language 15 minutes ago.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Immidiately, a new friend here, his name is JARMIL who is willing to spend his time to correct my text with so many mistakes. i'm so happy.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Thank you so much, JARMIL.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I hope we could be friends and you can correct my text frequently.(Smile)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4