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let me tell you about my self
my name is jade i am from jordon student in chemistry i am 20 years old i am interesting in sports like: bodybuilding and football ..
(my body is an holy thing to me) that is my little secret ^^ i am here for improve my English and learn Spanish and make a lot of friends all over the world :) correct it please ^^

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- my name is jade i am from jordon student in chemistry i am 20 years old i am interesting in sports like: bodybuilding and football ..
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- (my body is an holy thing to me) that is my little secret ^^ i am here for improve my English and learn Spanish and make a lot of friends all over the world :) correct it please ^^
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