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  • Blind Date

  • Because Sophie didn't attend class after the Chinese festival holidays,I played a joy with my friends,said:"She must have a blind date which was planed by her parents."Surprisedly,it doesn't a joy but a fact.Indeed,it is a popularity that having a blind date in holidays,partly planed by parents or relatives.
  • "Do you have a house?" or "How many houses do you have?"or "Can you afford the housing loan?"House must be the main point and usually would be known before the blind date.
  • I approve of blind date,maybe it also a way to find your Mr. right.However,don't put house in the first place,the man accompanying you means everything.

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  • Satz 1
    • Because Sophie didn't attend class after the Chinese festival holidays,I played a joy with my friends,said:"She must have a blind date which was planed by her parents."Surprisedly,it doesn't a joy but a fact.Indeed,it is a popularity that having a blind date in holidays,partly planed by parents or relatives.
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  • Satz 2
    • "Do you have a house?" or "How many houses do you have?"or "Can you afford the housing loan?"House must be the main point and usually would be known before the blind date.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
  • Satz 3
    • I approve of blind date,maybe it also a way to find your Mr. right.However,don't put house in the first place,the man accompanying you means everything.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3