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Hello :)
Hello, I'm an italian girl and my dream is to travel in all the world.
But to be more sure of myself, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love how it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music's language).
I hope to have not do many errors! Bye bye!

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- Hello :)
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- Hello, I'm an italian girl and my dream is to travel in all the world.
  투표하세요!
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- But to be more sure of myself, I have to learn foreign languages, and in particular Spanish (beacause I love how it sounds) and English (because it is very popular and I think it is music's language).
  투표하세요!
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- I hope to have not do many errors! Bye bye!
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3