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Please help : The Conclusion
In conclusion, the First Car Policy brings both benefits and drawbacks.
It depends on how much we get from this policy.
From my point of view, the First Car Policy should not be promoted.
This is because the First Car Policy is opposite to energy saving plan.
It will cause financial difficulties.
Moreover, this policy will lead to dramatic traffic congestion.
Both people who bought a new car and people who have already had their own car will also face the problems resulting from this policy.
What is best reason to give a chance for people to buy cars in reduced price, instead of giving them convenient public transportation?

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- In conclusion, the First Car Policy brings both benefits and drawbacks.
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句子 2
- It depends on how much we get from this policy.
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句子 3
- From my point of view, the First Car Policy should not be promoted.
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句子 4
- This is because the First Car Policy is opposite to energy saving plan.
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句子 5
- It will cause financial difficulties.
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句子 6
- Moreover, this policy will lead to dramatic traffic congestion.
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句子 7
- Both people who bought a new car and people who have already had their own car will also face the problems resulting from this policy.
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句子 8
- What is best reason to give a chance for people to buy cars in reduced price, instead of giving them convenient public transportation?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8