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  • Bad Luck

  • Oh, my bad luck always follows my steps, there's no way to make it to understand my needs, my dad once told me that my luck is sleeping under a big tree like an old man who tired from his life.
  • I've been sitting here by myself thinking back and wondering if that is true, I just hoped that my dad told me where can I find that place, and I wanna ask him one question !!
  • Do you tired from me or did I give up trying!!
  • Can you just give me a chance to find my way back to make it right, I always believe that there is a way but we have to find it.

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    • Oh, my bad luck always follows my steps, there's no way to make it to understand my needs, my dad once told me that my luck is sleeping under a big tree like an old man who tired from his life.
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    • I've been sitting here by myself thinking back and wondering if that is true, I just hoped that my dad told me where can I find that place, and I wanna ask him one question !!
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    • Can you just give me a chance to find my way back to make it right, I always believe that there is a way but we have to find it.
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