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Văn bản từ ShirleyLin - English

  • Nowadays many old cities are rebuilt and redesignerd.

  • A growing increasingly of city's popularity have become necessitated for the reconstruction or extension of city, fulfilling the needs of citizens in contemporary society.
  • It is advised that older buildings should be demolished, for these buildings retarded the development of city.
  • The suggestion is reasonable and corresponding for people' benefits, but the city's designer should pay attention to the protection and renovation in some historical buildings.
  • Apparently, rebuilding of one city can damage the building heritage in one city or one country, for older buildings are normally regarded as the architectural style.
  • Some historical buildings are important of a cityscape portion, especially if those are the landmark building.
  • For example, there is not much different between New York and Beijing, where without the Forbidden City.
  • These buildings underwent the test of time, reflecting their value.
  • These older buildings have been replaced to skyscrapers, which stand in stark contrast to other around buildings.
  • The declining of classical buildings will be gradually eroded by people' sense of identity, for their ideas are as the same as other counties.
  • It is therefore fair to say that it may be justified for high repairing fee, because of cultural or appreciating values of older buildings.
  • We should meanwhile acknowledge that it is a attractive idea that to demolish obsolete buildings so as to extend the street and high-rise buildings.
  • Living at inner city area, some older buildings are responsible for slow development of area underutilisation and transportation networks.
  • It should also be noted that older buildings, such as lights, safety, sanitation, ventilation, swage treatment etc, are better than new buildings.
  • The city center, through streets are remodelled and utilities are upgraded, seems like more comfortable and livable.
  • This is the precursor for a development country, for investors are normally not interested in cities which look not modern.
  • To summarise, the value of older buildings should be balanced to a broader perspective while the extension of cities should not be the only considerable factory.
  • New buildings can be compatible with nowadays buildings, avoiding to have an adverse affection that arise from cultural sense of identity.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • A growing increasingly of city's popularity have become necessitated for the reconstruction or extension of city, fulfilling the needs of citizens in contemporary society.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • It is advised that older buildings should be demolished, for these buildings retarded the development of city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • The suggestion is reasonable and corresponding for people' benefits, but the city's designer should pay attention to the protection and renovation in some historical buildings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Apparently, rebuilding of one city can damage the building heritage in one city or one country, for older buildings are normally regarded as the architectural style.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Some historical buildings are important of a cityscape portion, especially if those are the landmark building.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • For example, there is not much different between New York and Beijing, where without the Forbidden City.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
  • câu 8
    • These older buildings have been replaced to skyscrapers, which stand in stark contrast to other around buildings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • The declining of classical buildings will be gradually eroded by people' sense of identity, for their ideas are as the same as other counties.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • It is therefore fair to say that it may be justified for high repairing fee, because of cultural or appreciating values of older buildings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • We should meanwhile acknowledge that it is a attractive idea that to demolish obsolete buildings so as to extend the street and high-rise buildings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Living at inner city area, some older buildings are responsible for slow development of area underutilisation and transportation networks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • It should also be noted that older buildings, such as lights, safety, sanitation, ventilation, swage treatment etc, are better than new buildings.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • The city center, through streets are remodelled and utilities are upgraded, seems like more comfortable and livable.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • This is the precursor for a development country, for investors are normally not interested in cities which look not modern.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
  • câu 16
    • To summarise, the value of older buildings should be balanced to a broader perspective while the extension of cities should not be the only considerable factory.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
  • câu 17
    • New buildings can be compatible with nowadays buildings, avoiding to have an adverse affection that arise from cultural sense of identity.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17