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Text from ChenCrazy - English

  • Man and Computer

  • With the development of technology, computer becomes increasingly important in human life.
  • People can broaden their horizon with the computer.Such as studends can learn more knowledge which they did not learn from their teachers by using a computer.And people can know about the weather,the news,the econimic and so on with the computer.
  • But every coin has two points.One said ," The real danger is not the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like computer." I agree with that.The reason why I said so as follow.
  • Firstly, people becomes more and more reliable on computer.They use computer to help them finish the mission.It will cut down their creativity.Secondly,people will become more lazier than before.Thirdly,people will more easier to sick when they spend long time with computer.
  • In my opinion,computer is just a tool.It is not equivalent with man's brain.Man should not think like the computer.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 2
    • People can broaden their horizon with the computer.Such as studends can learn more knowledge which they did not learn from their teachers by using a computer.And people can know about the weather,the news,the econimic and so on with the computer.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • But every coin has two points.One said ," The real danger is not the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like computer." I agree with that.The reason why I said so as follow.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • Firstly, people becomes more and more reliable on computer.They use computer to help them finish the mission.It will cut down their creativity.Secondly,people will become more lazier than before.Thirdly,people will more easier to sick when they spend long time with computer.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • In my opinion,computer is just a tool.It is not equivalent with man's brain.Man should not think like the computer.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5