添削

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Succes
I want to be suces i don't know what it takes to be succes but I just know I'm willing to fight to make my dreams come realitie, I won't care about what people thinks about me.
I want to learn many languages as possible, I want to be a good atlete, I want to be an exelent doctor, I want to be millionaire.
Maybe you're reading this and you think well that's kind of hard, haha well it can be hard but not impossible if I breath that idea.
I've been trying my whole life and I'll die trying and if a die before making it I will die satisfy because I know that I made 200% to made it.
So you there yes you listen to me try the very best you can and never give in never, If God is with me who will be against me.

タイトル
- Succes
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - タイトル
文 1
- I want to be suces i don't know what it takes to be succes but I just know I'm willing to fight to make my dreams come realitie, I won't care about what people thinks about me.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 1
文 2
- I want to learn many languages as possible, I want to be a good atlete, I want to be an exelent doctor, I want to be millionaire.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 2
文 3
- Maybe you're reading this and you think well that's kind of hard, haha well it can be hard but not impossible if I breath that idea.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 3
文 4
- I've been trying my whole life and I'll die trying and if a die before making it I will die satisfy because I know that I made 200% to made it.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 4
文 5
- So you there yes you listen to me try the very best you can and never give in never, If God is with me who will be against me.
  投票しよう！
- 新しい添削を追加しましょう！ - 文 5